Cool, great coloring! That must have taken a while.

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Nice looks interesting

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Awesome!!! Looks great! I cant wait to see the rest!!

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very cute (futere = future) *i like little dire puppies head scruf, lol*

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PUPPIES!!!!
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Well, your composition and drawing is good, but you ought to brush up on your grammar a little bit. You say "are" when you mean "our", and "future" is spelled wrong. It might also behoove you to convey the pup's inner monologue as just that, perhaps in italics, with a cloud-thought bubble, or a different font.
You might also think to make a prologue page or something to convey who is who for a moment; we've no idea who the set of evil eyes belong to. Or what sort of leaders this pack has, ie. noble, kind, or complete duffers. It would be nice to know their motivations behind choosing this pup to lead. If it's a dire wolf, and his mom and dad are not, why have they chosen him? Did they adopt him? Is the superior size and strength of a direwolf good enough to overcome all other stigmas, like if he's a bastard son, or is being a dire wolf some sort of fortuitous genetic mutation that doesn't happen that often?

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kinja was just chosin for he was a dire wolf mix the leader found that speshel for he is a half mix to.thanks for the tips tho this is just a starter comic enyways im probuly going to make more in the future.

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Awesome work on the pup's expression in the last panel! I like how you've set it up so it seems that many pack members are gasping and questioning the pup's presence as well.

aww thanks im pritty shure you noteced my pore spelling habbits sorry about that ill probuly later on re right the whole thing and post it on agin.

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I liked this comic well before I joined devaintART! Awesome! ^^

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